change “Clonk”
to “Dink,” change
the ampersand
to “’n” and the
first letter of
the next word
from “D” to “C”
in line 10,
“all by”
becomes
“alone amongst”
later (this
is crucial!),
“define” is
to now be
“divine”
consider adding
the word “content”
in short measure
after the first in
stance that the word
“context” appears
“ditzy . . . enmeshed”
to “dizzily” (remove
“to contextualize”)
change “the now”
to “the past” – duh!
the next “context”
should be “law”
then switch “law”
to “order” (or vice
versa), after which,
add a semicolon and
(for context, of course)
“rank and file over content”
(et voilà, we now have “content”)
make “Greg” “Margaret”
w/in paren.: “point taken”
change “forget” to “remember”
change the following period to
a comma (“B” obvy to “b”) and
“One hundred percent” [sic]
to just “(100%)” and also
“boy did I ever” to
“fuck if I didn’t”
the next “was” should be “am”
therefore “Omigod they work
like you would not believe!”
should follow in parentheses
decide whether or not
“Just like usual”
should stand on its own
and add “Peanuts.”
after “…circus?”
